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[Giveaway] Mia (OC)

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she belongs wholy to :iconkaisakuris: :3

as part of my 100 watcher giveaway event, Kaisa was lucky and won! :D

ink and aquarelle colors
I added some light in the background because one corner was pretty grey :O
hope you like it :3
Image size
1976x1666px 664.51 KB
Make
Apple
Model
iPhone 5
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
64
Date Taken
Nov 25, 2016, 4:18:01 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hmm, I think you did a great job on the hair and the wings too!

Here is a list of what you need to improve:

- You did well coloring the eyes but it looks uneven. One eye is bigger than the other one.

- The waist is way too slim and it makes it un-proportional to the chest.

- The way you draw the wine glass isn't aligned with the perspective of the drawing. I suggested to tilt it the other way,

- In my opinion, the way the legs are drawn is a bit weird. It' hard to explain.

Hope this helps ya! ^-^