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ToB contest 2016 - The duties of a big brother

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Pampering your little sister and keeping the creeps away from her :3

(no hurt feelings, love you Zaveid)

So yes! Of course I picked Eizen as the Berseria character! And accompanying him are Edna and Zaveid.
the three of them need a comedy show...



I hope commenters from :iconprojectcomment: read this :)

this picture is half a year old, so while I usually love love love suggestions on how to improve in the next step - the next step is already in the past for me XD I even moved on to a second medium :3

So please regard it as a snapshot as how my aer was back then :3
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The scenery painting is so realistic that it is almost possible to confuse it with a photograph, although it is possible to see some small details of blushes effect which makes it accused as a painting. I love hairs painting, they are graceful.
The characters are in the same weight as background, however, losing a few points, this is important because this reveals the contrast.
I see the professionalism in making objects and scenarios for the characters, but as the problem of every artist always the anatomy and fitting of clothes when you do not have the references. But, I reckon you have risked this with your memory to compose such a detailed and beautiful picture.
Of all three, I consider the girl more drawn correctly for a Shojo manga, in the boys the scales are quite good, but I find it necessary to correct the part of the trunk and the arms.